Desolation ~ Chapter 30!
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i like it
Highfist
2018-09-20 00:30:08 +0000 UTCand the "on" a few words before the "one / once" should be "one"
Daniel Alexander
2018-09-19 19:49:00 +0000 UTCreminds me of wetboys from the night angel trilogy. favorite kinda character and by the way theres a typo in the first paragraph its "once he got going" and you wrote one.
Louis Lariviere
2018-09-19 03:01:16 +0000 UTCLoving the descriptions of the environment and the movements of current/airflow.
Dennis Vanderkerken
2018-09-17 16:49:51 +0000 UTCMany thanks!!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-17 16:21:14 +0000 UTCLoving assassin Dale!
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-17 14:34:17 +0000 UTCTypos: Daleβs thoughts were whirling as he strained his cultivation technique to the maximum he possibly could. He was having an issue similar to when he had first been advanced to the D-ranks, where his Chi threads were slightly fractured. All he needed to do was gather enough Essence to fill the gaps, but the issue was that he could only repair *one* section at a time. *Once* he got going the usable portion would expand, rushing the *remains/remaining* toward healing.
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-17 14:22:53 +0000 UTCTypo: Daleβs thoughts were whirling as he strained his cultivation technique to the maximum he possibly could. He was having an issue similar to when he had first been advanced to the D-ranks, where his Chi threads were slightly fractured. All he needed to do was gather enough Essence to fill the gaps, but the issue was that he could only repair *one* section at a time.
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-17 14:20:03 +0000 UTCIs it just me or is the story becoming darker/less humorous.
Fred Lloyd
2018-09-15 03:34:01 +0000 UTCPresents to turn in eh
Leaf
2018-09-14 20:24:04 +0000 UTCHis like goblin murder santa. Stuffing goblin corpses into his magic bag.
Malcolm Tent
2018-09-14 18:10:19 +0000 UTC
