The Prince and the Peasant
Added 2023-09-14 19:37:30 +0000 UTCThis is a short story set around the time Malachi first broke into Second Gate
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Kamal Suntorch, son of the Lady of the Sunscorched Desert, â the most powerful and richest person in the country, who held nearly a sixth of Suntorchâs entire political votes and seats â was bored.
Drawing energy from a Hudau Heritage Stone and into his mana-garden might have been an easy, safe, and reliable path to advance, without any of the risks normally associated with powerful poultices, potions, or pillsâŠ
But it was boring. Just draw the essence from the stone, convert it into your mana, and then compact it to add to your mana-garden. Break away the power of the stone and stuff it into a spell diagram until it was mastered, then pack in more until it was ingrained.
âNow, now,â his tutor, an occultist who worked for Lledrith university, said. âPay more attention to the stone. Youâre letting some of the power dissipate into the air.â
âDoes it matterâŠ?â Kamal asked, letting out a sigh. âItâs the third one Iâve used â its effect is going to be pretty limited regardless. A small flaw doesnât matter.â
The occultistâs eye twitched, and Kamal had to stop himself from rolling his eyes. The woman wasnât a real occultist anyways. Sheâd just used a pill â probably the Conduit of Heaven Elixir â to break through to seventh gate, when she wasnât able to do it herself.
His mother would absolutely pulverize her in a contest of real power. Eventually, heâd be able to do the same.
âWasted power is still wasted power,â the woman said in a restrained tone. âAs is wasted money. Any Hudau Heritage Stone is worth more than you know.â
âNo, itâs not,â Kamal said with a sigh. âA practitioner level stone like this is worth â on average â ten and a half million sun-notes. Thatâs about six hundred and fifty thousand Mossfordian silver, or five hundred and twenty thousand Elohian credits⊠Would you like it in other currencies?â
The womanâs eye twitched again and she coughed slightly.
âNo, thatâs alright. But the point about wasted power still stands.â
He stopped pulling power from the stone and put it down on the desk, then looked at her. His wings flicked in irritation.
âIf youâd just let me advance to third gate, then Iâd be able to stop wasting time and money on beefing up my full-gate spells. Iâm stronger than anyone else in the world my age who hasnât advanced to third gate. Iâd bet ten of these stones on that.â
The woman stared at him, and then she shook her head.
âNo, you arenât. Youâve been groomed your entire life to hold power. Youâve been given countless treasures and advancement tools. And always the best of the best â things like three Hudau Heritage Stones, a dozen Golden Soul Elixirs, and a Lushloam Seed.â
Normally, a tutor saying something like this to a student would be a bad idea. Especially if that student was the child of one of the hundred or so most powerful people in the world.
But Galilahi wasnât a normal tutor. The boyâs mother had given her explicit instructions to treat Kamal honestly, and to shape him into a monster. He needed to be able to dominate in the proxy tournamentâs spellbinder division, and preferably in the arcanist one too, once he got older.
The fact that the boy had gone through dozens of tutors over the years wasnât the best mark in her favor, though.
The young half phoenix glared at Galilahi. Who was she to say such things like that to him?
âAnd what of my Nascent Truth? Are you going to say that wasnât my hard work?â he demanded.
âYes,â she said. âBy virtue of birth, if nothing else. You already had an easy connection to a half a dozen truths about rebirth, fire, and phoenixes. If youâd managed to create a different truth, then youâd have done it on your own. Instead, youâve just leaned on your bloodline and the powers that were handed to you.â
Kamalâs lips twitched into a frown and then he shook his head.
âThereâs a flaw in your logic. Maybe I didnât earn everything I have, but that doesnât mean that thereâs anyone my age who could actually beat me in a fight. Iâd even be willing to jump ranks and take on a spellbinder. If you can find anyone my age or younger who can beat me, then Iâll pay attention to your lessons. But you wonât be able to.â
âDeal,â she said, then channeled power into her wand and teleported back to Lledrith.
Galilahi strolled over to her desk and began to search through the profiles of students. Marie Cousteau might be able to beat him, but only if she had the range to build up power and actually hurt him. Dario? No⊠He was doing well, and sheâd give him the go-ahead to ascent to spellbinder soon, but he wasnât strong enough. Summoners tended to be weak until third gate anyways.
Her eyes fell upon Mingâs folder. The girl was a perfect example of everything that Kamal wasnât.
Sheâd been born the child of two peasants in Le-Shi, one of Daochengâs minor vassal kingdoms.
Her legacy was nothing special either, simply allowing her to see in the dark.
But Ming had been born with a once in a lifetime understanding of mana, and leveraged her prodigal skill amazingly. If Kamal was a paper dragon, then Ming was a true dragon.
Yes, sheâd be perfect.
Galilahi flicked her wand and appeared next to Ming.
The girl glanced over at her consideringly and inclined her head.
âMiss Galilahi. How may I help you?â
âAre you up for a sparring match?â Galilahi asked. âNot with me. The prince of Suntorch is being a brat, and he thinks he can defeat anyone at second gate. For compensation Iâll offer you ten university-level points, and five hundred practitioner-level points.â
Ming stared at her with her sharp, angry eyes.
âDeal.â
Galilahi took Mingâs arm and teleported them back to Kamalâs training room, where heâd been lazily pulling in power from the stone again.
When the pair arrived, he glanced over at them, and was shocked at the anger that met him in Mingâs eyes. She looked like she wanted to kill him.
âKamal Suntorch, this is Lao Ming. Ming, this is Kamal.â Galilahi said.
âPleasure to meet you,â Kamal said, extending his hand with a politicianâs smile plastered on his face.
âNo,â the girl said.
Ming hated nobles. She hated the wealthy. She knew that in most places, they werenât still in true power, and that in Kijani and Elohi they didnât exist at all anymore.
But knowing that couldnât erase a lifetime of hatred. Hatred at Le Yu, the king of her petty little home. Hatred at the Storm King, for allowing them to stay in power. Hatred for all of the occultists who had the power to fix things, but didnât.
âWellâŠâ Kamal said, seeming to not know what to say.
âLetâs clear the room,â Galilahi suggested. She waved her hand and hands, disks, and telekinetic waves began to clear everything out of the way in a hurry, until they were only in an empty room.
âTake ten paces apart, and then begin,â Galilahi commanded. âUse deadly force. Iâll intercept anything before it causes serious damage.â
Kamal strutted ten paces away, while Ming took measured paces.
âBegin!â Galilahi shouted.
Before Kamal could even get a spell out, Ming had extended her hand.
Ming only had one desolation spell, the Silver Blade. It was halfway to a full gate spell on its own, and backed by her second gate desolation spell, which was a full gate enhancement to the raw strength of her desolation attacks, it was absurdly powerful for a second gate practitioner to have.
Combine that with the fact that her homemade mana-meditation focused on enhancing the raw power of any spell, at the cost of everything else?
She was a monster.
But Kamalâs defenses were absurd, even for a phoenix. Not only did his phoenix blood give him some inherent healing, but heâd turned his second gate phoenix magic into a healing factor.
If that wasnât enough, heâd used his physical mana to create permanent armor around him.
Mingâs blade sliced through the armor as if it was wet paper, and slid into Kamalâs body. Galilahi stopped it before it went too deep, allowing Kamalâs powerful regeneration to restore him over the course of a few minutes.
âWhat⊠in the primes name⊠was that?â he asked. âIâve got way, way more mana than anyone my age should have, but you sliced through my armor like it wasnât even there!â
Ming stood and stared at him dispassionately.
âYou wonât win round two,â he warned Ming, and Ming smirked at him.
They stepped apart, and when Galilahi told them to begin, Kamal unleashed a tide of Flaming Pheonix Feathers where Ming was.
Ming moved in a blur, slipping out of the way of the feathers. Sheâd devoted her life mana almost entirely to enhancing her speed, and while Galilahi didnât consider that a viable long-term strategy, it was undeniably effective.
She extended her hand and sent a Silver Blade at him.
Kamalâs wings flared out as he used them to dodge just out of the way.
Galilahi nodded her approval. Ming was a monster, but her tight focus and raw power meant that she was predictable, and burned herself out of mana quickly.
The feathers began to chase Ming, but she kept running in circles, avoiding them and dancing out of their way.
Kamal was doing something with his first gate physical mana. It wouldnât be obvious to Ming, but Galilahi could see he was focusing tightly on his mana control as he layered three Shield spells over him.
She actually was impressed by that. Any leakage, and the spells would become visible to the naked eye and mana senses. As it was, though, it was just a ripple on each.
Ming swung another Silver Blade at him, and it cracked through his shields, but wasnât able to penetrate his full-gate armor.
Kamal grinned and sent another plume of feathers to fill the air.
âYour swordâs a good trick, but Iâve got it countered. Nobody my age can beat me, Galilahi. Told you that.â
The anger on Mingâs face was apparent when he said that. She cut the power to her speed spells, and stood still. The feathers began to close in on her, and Galilahi thought she might have given up.
Then the feathers exploded into puffs of random energies, and Galilahiâs eyes widened.
The young girl had called a half a dozen Silver Blades around her and swept them through the area, slicing all the feathers in half.
Kamal actually looked worried at that, so he dropped subtlety in order to layer as many Shields over him as he could. With his absurd levels of mana, he could sustain nearly a dozen.
Ming waved her hand, and then a massive sword swung from her hand. It forged out of enough mana that it had to have drained nearly her entire reserves.
It shattered through all of the Shield spells and cracked the armor. As the full gate spell began to repair itself, she ran in, burning life mana for speed, and punched him in his face.
He tried to dodge, but with her speed, he could do little. Her blows hammered down, beating him until Galilahi had to pull her off of him.
His regenerative properties went to work, and he was fine before long. He looked at Ming, and then bowed, then turned to Galilahi and bowed again.
âThank you,â he said. âI⊠Never expected someone would be able to beat me. Please⊠Teach me. I want to be as strong as you are.â
Comments
Yep! Several of them will show up again in the future
Tobias Begley
2024-07-20 17:44:49 +0000 UTCI just realized, but some of the candidates to fight the phoenix were from another short story. Awesome!
Lola
2024-07-19 22:35:50 +0000 UTCLOL! Thank you.
Tim Dedopulos
2023-09-15 10:55:51 +0000 UTC